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Mirjapurer shob cheye bishal jomidar bari.Nam tar Sopnopuri.Tobe ei bari onek purano ar pori takto hoye geche.Kew sekhane jai na,karon lok mukhe kotha chala chali hoi je ei bari te naki vut ache.Jey ei barite giyeche,se ar fi re asheni.Tai manush ei sopnopuri te jete voi pai.Ei bari ti Mirapurer ekdom shesh mathai obosthito,ei barir pashey royeche Vawal Jongol.Sondhar por ondhokar hoye geley ei bari theke odvut shob shobdo shunte pawa jai.Ei jomidar barir ek itihash ache jeta onekey jane,kintu tara seta onno der ke bole na,karon jey ei jomidar barir itihash fash korte chai,se oggato ek karone rohossho jonok vabe mara jai.Keno mara jai,seta goto 25 bochor pore o kew ber korte pareni.Sopnopuri hoye uthechilo vuter puri.

Ei jomidar bari 25 bochor aage ei rokom chilona,sekhane manush thakto,shavabik spondon chilo manusher.Kintu sey kal rater por shob kichu palte jai ek nimishey.Ei jomidar baritey ghote ek mormantik ghotona.So-poribare khun hoi puro jomidar bongsher manushjon.Ei ghotonar por,sopnopuri te kew jeto na.Tobe ghoona ghotar dui-tin mash por ei sopnopuri ash-pasher manush jonderke vabiye tulechilo.Sekhan theke odvut shob awaj asha shuru korlo,oi barir upor diye kono pakhi o porjonto ure jeto na.Diner bela sopnopuri ekdom onno aat-dosh ta barir motoi,tobe raat holey shuru hoi odvut shobdo ,ar eishob shobdo shune elakar ekjon giyechilo sey sonpopurir vetore,kintu se ar fi re ashe ni,Tokhon thekey lok mukhe chalu holo je oi barite vut ache.

Mirjapur thekey koyeksho kilomitar durey Dhaka shohor.Ei dhakar gulshaney thake Shawon (chele).Boyosh 30,chot-pote ek torun.Tar biye thik hoyechi Mirzapurer ek meye er sathe.Biye hobe dui soptaho por.Shawon ekai thake.Se office theke 3 soptaher chuti niyeche biye korbe bole.Mon mejaj tar khub valo,furfu re,karon se je notun bor hote jacche.Se ajkey rowna hoye jabe Mirzapurer ud-dhesshe.Oikhane giye se tar hobu bou er sathe somoy katabe,tarpor dui soptaho por to biyey hobe !Se bag guchiye fello,chot kore ready hoye basha theke beriye porlo karon tar tin tar bus dhorte hobe ar tokhon somoy chilo dupur derta.Se dhaka shohorer jam,vir thelatheli kore onek koste bus stand e pouchalo.Bus e uthlo jeta ta ke soja Mirzapur niye jabe tar moner manush er kache.Prai sare tin ghonta por Shawon Mirzapur pouchalo.Se to khub khushi,Bivar sathe tar dekha je hobe onek din por.Biva e holo or hobu bou er nam,sundori,misti mukher misti hashir odhikarini.

Shawon chole gelo soja Bivar barite.Dorja khultey Biva to Khushi te attohara.Ora ghurte be holo,ek choto khato pukur er dhare boshe ora golpo korte laglo,amoni golpo je shuru hole thamtey chai na.Biva khub valo pitha banate pare,golpo shesh e o Shawon ke pitha baniye khawalo.Dujoney khub khushi oder notun future niye.Kintu oder khushi ki sobsomoy thakbe? Ora ki oder sopner ghor badhte parbe?

Golpo sheshe eibar Shawon er jawar pala,O bivar poribarer sobar kach theke biday niye elo.Raat o hoye ashchilo.Shawon to Bivar basai thakte parena,karon ekta samajik niyom holo jey hobu shami-stri der biye hobe,tara ek bashai thakte parbena.Tai Shawon ke thakar jonno ekta jaiga khuja khuji korte holo.Kintu o kono thakar jaiga e pelo na,shob gula bunglow chilo booked.Shawon pore gelo chintai,o raat e thakbe kothai?O chinta korte korte hete jacchilo.Kokhon je o hathe hathe sopnopurir shamne chole elo,seta o ter o paini.Baritir shamne ashtey O thomke daralo,baritir poribesh baire theke o ke kemon jani ak-krishto korlo.O bujhte parlo je bariti khali,kew thake na,karon bariti chilo ekdom ondhokar.O vablo,ei baritey thaka jai,mondo ki?Ek jaigai te to thaktey hobe,tachara bari ti eto boro tar upor ekdom khali,vitore giye dekhi,thakar bebosta kora jai kina.Eita vabte vabte Shawon egiye gelo jomidar baritir fotoker di ke.O or bag theke torch light ber kore on kore fotok er pashe name plate e dekhlo lekha sopnopuri.Nam ta or khub pochondho holo keno jani.

O fotok er lock khulte jawar aagey fotok ti pana apni khule jai.Shawon obak hoye gelo.Koutuhol boshoto o vitore probesh korlo.Sopno puri te jete hole ek boro bagan par hoye jete hoi,Shawon hete jacche bagan er majh khan diye kora rasta dhore.Ei rasta soja chole geche Sopnopuri main dorjar di ke.O hatche,Char dike thom thome poribesh,pin poton nirobobta.Shawon vablo jokhon fotok ti ash chorjo jonok vabe nije nije khule gelo,tokhon nischoy sekhane kichu ache,tai o ke vitore jetey hobe.tachara o etao vablo je bepar ta kemon jani kaktaliyo je or kono thakar jaiga ney ar o ashlo to eke bare ei sopnopuri te.Ei rokom kaktaliyo to koto kichui hoi,shob kichur ki ma ne thake naki?bagan er rasta diye hete hete Shawon akhon Sopnopurir main dorjar shamne dariye.Hate ekhono torch light jolche.Dorja chilo bondo,Shawon chinta korlo eta khola jai kivabe.Hotat shawon ekta awaj shunte pelo,awaj ta khub khino chilo but o joto kuku bujhte parlo je ke jeno o ke or nam dhore dakche,kintu oikhane to Shawon chara ar kew chilo na,Shawon pore gelo golok dhadhai,hocche ki eishob?O ke aro obak korte fotoker moto main dorja tao apna apni nije nije khule gelo.Ar shawon o koutohol chepe na rakhte pere sopno purir vitore pa baralo. Shawon to dhuke gelo sopno purir vitore, er por ki hobe?eto kichu thakte Shawon keno?Jekhane giye manush ar fi re ashe ni,sekhaney Shawon ke odrisshota amontron janalo keno? Shawon ki kono vabe ei jomidar barir itihash er sathe jukto? Ki somporko Shawon er ei jomidar barir sathe?

Part Two:

Shawon birat boro dorja thele vitore dhuke porlo.Char dike kuch kuche ondhokar,vaggo valo je or sathe ekta torch light chilo,torcher light diye o onek koste hatahati korte korte koyekta ashbab er sathe dhakka khawar por light er switch khuje pelo.O light er switch on kore ghure daralo.Or shamne pura sopnopuri pore ache.Odvut sundor charpasher jomidari designs.Dekhe money hoi na je eita onek purano jomidar er bari.O jekhane dariye chilo seta dekhe mone hobe kono dorbar hall ba kono jolsha ghor jekhane hoito baiji ra nach diye jomidar barir lokjonder ke entertain korto.Mejer puratai alponate akha.Sundor sey alponar karukaj,kothaw kothaw alponar kichu ongsho koshe gese,kintu ashol design ta akhono ache.Shawon jolsha ghorer ekdom majhkhane eshe daralo.Or mathar upor bishal boro ek jharbati tung tang shobdo kore norachora korchilo,mone hocchilo je ekhoni seta or mathar upor eshe porbe.Jolsha ghor ti golakar akritir ar gol kore charpashe khandani chair diye sajano,obossho se chair gulote onek dulo jome chilo.Jolsha ghorer soja borabor siri chilo jeta uthe geche do tola ar tin tolay.Shawon er iccha holo ektu upor theke ghure ashar,vitore jokhon o dhukey poreche,tokhon upor theke ghure ashte problem kothai?

Shawon pa baralo sirir dike,jey o siri te pa dibe,tokhoni baka siri gulo soman hoye gelo ar o beye beye niche neme porlo,o barbar uthar chesta koreo ut-the parlona.Amon somoy o shunte pelo je ke jeno or nam dhore dakche,awajta khub porichito mone holo,or agroho aro bere gelo,sopnopurite dhukar por e or keno jani ei jaiga ke khub apon mone hocchilo,prothom prothom je voi ta chilo seta udhaw hoye gelo,akhon or vitor explore korar agroho jonmo nilo.Keno fotok ar dorja apna apni khule gelo? emni emni to khule jawar kotha noy,akhon key ba or nam dhore dakche,nischoy eikhane kew ache,kintu ke se?ar Shawon er sathe tar somporkoi ba ki?Ei shob proshno er uttor khojar nesha chepe gelo Shawon er mathai.


Koyekbar bertho chesta korar por or upore uthar iccha chole gelo.Puro sopnopurir poribesh eksathe sundor abar sey sundorjo er moddhey ki jeno ek ojana voutik rohossho lukiye ache.O abar eshe jolsha ghorer majhkhanta te thik jharbati er niche eshe daralo,jharbatir norachora tokhon bondo hoi ni.O ghure ghure jolsha ghorer charpash dekhte laglo.Jolsha ghorer deyale onek gulo painting er chobi chilo,mone hoy ei jomidar bari te jara shashon koreche tader chobi.Chobi gulo dekhe or mone holo je kono jadughore ache o.Ekta ekta kore chobi dekhte dekhte o deyaler shesh prante chole elo,shesher chobi ta chilo ekti kalo kapore dhaka,O kalo kapor ti uthate gelo,ar tokhoni jharbati ti thas kore matir niche pore gelo,ar sathe sathe jolsha ghor ti abar aager moto ondhokar hoye gelo.Shawon abar or torch ber korlo,o kalo kapor ti soriye chobitir dike takalo,chobiti dekhe or to chokkhu chorokgach hoye gelo.Eita kore somvob?Je sopnopurite o konodin o asheni,ei prothom bar asha,sekhane ki kore hubohu or chobi deyale tanano thakte pare?Tao abar prachin painting er chobi,Shawon kingkortobbobimuro hoye porlo.Ar amon somoy O shunte pelo je ke jeno gan gaiche.....

Mone hoi bagan thekey ganer awaj ashche,o dorja diye ber hoye bagan e ashlo.Ekti chele kontho gan gaiche.Kintu ke se?Shawon bagan er gach thele thele khujte laglo je ke gan gaiche........Khujte khujte obosheshe o peye gelo sey manush ta ke.Manush ti apon mone gan geye jacchilo onno dike mukh kore.Pichon dik theke dekhe Shawoner mone holo je kono choto chele 19-20 boyosher kew gan gacche.Je chilo or shamne tar porone chilo kalo shirt ar kalo pant........shoker rong.Gan gawa shesh holo,ar omni shawon jore jore chitkar kore bollo:
Shawon:ke oikhane? ke apni?
Kono sara elona.Shawon je shamne agiye giye dekhbe je manushta ke,seta or sahoshe hocchilona,karon jolsha ghore nijer chobi dekhar por or mone ek ojana voy dhuke giyechilo.Shawon abar dak dilo.
Shawon:ke apni? ghure daran amar dike,ke apni?
Eibar mansuhta ghure daralo Shawon er mukhomukhi hoye.Ek torun chele ,dekhte oto sundor noi,tobe shob kichu miliye ki jeno ek soundorjo acche cheletar moddhe.Shawonke dekhey chele ta heshe fello.Hashi taw chilo sundor,innocent.
Shawon:Hashchen keno? ke apni?
Chelta kotha bolte shuru korlo.
Chele:Sopnopurite sagotom.Tomakey khoja hocchilo etodin dhore,dirgho 25 bochor dhore.Obosheshe tomar dekha pawa gelo.Su-sagotom aro ekbar.
Chele ta ke dekhe Shawon er cheye boyosh e choto mone hobe,kintu tarpor o o ke tumi bole daka te Shawon ektu rege gelo,kintu rag korar cheye or jonno ekhon shob rohossho janata beshi joruri.
Shawon:ki? amake khoja hobe keno? taw abar 25 bochor dhore?
Chele9mukhe hashi niye):Shob kichui jante parbe,somoy ashuk.
Shawon:Apnar nam ki?eikhaney thaken ?
Cheleti kichu na boley ghure gelo ar shamner dike hat-the laglo.
Shawon(jore jore):amar proshno er uttor na diye chole jacchen keno?
Cheleti kichui na bole hethe jete laglo.Shawon dour dilo cheleti ke dhorar jonno,kintu Shawon jotoi cheletir kache jai,chelti totoi dure shore jai apnaapni vabe kono rokom body movement charai.Kono vabey Shawon cheleti ke atkate parlo na.Tobe cheleti ondhokar e udhaw hoye jawar aage or kalo shirt er pichone sada okkhore lekha uthe ashlo: SHABBIR ............


Part Three:

Por din shokal e Shawon uthe dekhlo je o sopnopurir bagan er mati te pore ache.Gotokal raat e ki hoyechilo oi chele ta udhaw howar por or kichui mone nei.O uthe porlo ar hotat or mathay chinchin kore betha onuvob korlo.Keno hotat ei betha holo o bujhe utthe parlo na.Shawon or hater ghorir dik e takiye dekhlo shokal 7 ta baje.Or mone porlo je or to abar Bivar sathe dekha korte jete hobe.O chinta korte laglo gotokal raat e ja kichu hoyeche seta ki o Biva ke bolbe naki bolbena.O vablo thak o ke bole ar tension baranor kono dorkar nai.Ja hobar o nijey korbe.O abar raat e fi re ashbe ei sopnopuri te ar janar chesta korbe ki rohosh-sho ache er piche?

Shawon dekhlo je sopnopurir main fotk ta kholai ache,o beriye elo ar hat-the laglo,shamne ek dokan dekhlo,chot khato mudi dokan.Dokan theke ekta pawruti ar kola kine o shokal er nasta sarlo konomote.
Tarpor soja chole gelo Bivar bashai.Biva ke niye Mirjapur ghurte ber holo.Ghurte Ghurte ora dujon chole elo sopnopurir shamne.Biva bollo je o ekta chobi tulbe ei sopnopurir shamne.Shawon o raji hoye gelo,or bag theke digicam ber kore click click click prai 15-20 ta chobi tule fello Bivar.

Biva: jano,amar ei jomidar bari ta khub valo lage,kemon jeno ekta rajokiyo vab acche.
Shawon: hmm
Biva: hmm ki? bari ta sundor na?
Shawon: ha sundor
Biva: amar chobi gulo koi dekhi !
Shawon: Ei naw
Biva chobi dekhte laglo ar Shawon onno monoshko hoye boshe roilo.Biva beparta kheyal kore o ke guta mere bollo:
Biva: ki hoyeche? eto mon mora keno? Raat e valo ghum hoi ni?
Shawon: HMMM........ na mon mora na to,ekta jinish vabchi
Biva: ki?
Shawon: accha sobai bole ei barite vut ache,kotha ta ki sotti?
Biva: ki jani,ami to jani na,tobe lo ke bole vut ache,kintu ami vut e bishwas kori na
Shawon: hmm
Biva: Tumi raat e kothay chile?
Shawon (mittha bollo): eito otithi rest house e
Biva: o accha,oi rest house ta shobcheye valo,baire theke kew ashle ei rest house ey uthe.amar chobi gula to valoi ashche,tai na?
Biva Shawon ke chobi gulo dekhacchilo.
Shawon: Ha sundor hoye che chobi gulo,ami ei gulo wash kore kal ke tomake diye dibo.
Biva: thik acche,kintu tumi nijer chobi tulbena? shudhu to amar e chobi tule gele
Shawon: tulbo kal ke.
Biva: oh ho,tomake to bolay hoyni,ajke baba hujur ke deke biyer ekta tarik thik korbe. tarpor se onujayi gaye holud,bouvat shob onushthan gulo hobe.Amar to vabtey valo lagche............
Shawon: Tai naki? valo kotha,amake tarik gulo janiyo,tahole amio ready hoye thakte parbo.
Biva: accha biye te tomar poribar theke kew ashbena?
Shawon: amar sobai to desher baire thake,sobai besto,biye te ashte parbena,tobe abbu ammu boleche bouvat er somoy tara ashbe.
Biva(mon kharap kore): ami to taderke dekhte cheyechilam,ektu ashirbad nite cheyechilam
Shawon: Sob e hobe tobe biye te na bouvat er somoy.Cholo tomake bashay diye ashi,sondha hote chollo.
Biva: cholo.

Shawon Biva ke bashay diye elo.Totkhon e ondhokar hoye geche,Mirjapur ektu gram er vitore howate sondha holey shob ekdom ondhokar hoye jai.Shawon er mathai tokhono ghurpak khacchilo onek kichu.O pa baralo sopnopurir dik e.Jotha riti fotok khola,dorja khola chilo,ar Shawon o vitore chole gelo.Ajke vitore dhuke o dekhlo je jolsha ghor ta ar ney.Sekhane ekta bishal uthan.Ar sekhane raat chilo na chilo diner moto poribesh.Kntu kew sekhane chilona.Shawon hotovomber moto dariye roilo,o khujchilo Shabbir ke,kintu eikhane to kew e nai.O ber hoye jete nilo,ar tokhoni hotat kore shobkichu ondhokar hoye gelo.Ekta kontho kotha bolte laglo:
Kontho: amar sathe dekha korte eshe, dekha na korey chole jaccho?
Shawon (ektu opros-tut hoye): ke kotha bolche?
Kontho: amake chinte parchona? amar kontho ki porichito mone hocchena?
Shawon: na chinte parchina,ke apni? apni ki Shabbir?
Kontho ta ho ho kore heshe uthlo.
Kontho: valoi mone ache dekhi !
Shawon: apni shamne ashchen na keno?
Kontho: shamne ashbo? thik ache ashchi
Shawon shamner dik e takiye roilo kintu ondhokar e o kono kichui dekhte pelo na.Amon somoy pichon theke ekta haat er sporsho o ter pelo or kadher upor.Shawon pichone ghuretey dekhlo sey chele ta ke ja ke se gotokal gan gaite shuneche,dekeche.
Shawon: apni?
Shabbir: voi pele naki?
Shawon: kichuta
Shabbir: valo voi pawa valo (heshe heshe)
Shawon: accha apni ke bloun to?
Shabbir: ami ke shunte chaw?tahole shono ami vut,vuuttttttttt (ottohashi diye)
Shawon (ektu shahosh niye): dekhun vut bole kichu nei,apni amake boka banacchen
Shabbir: tumi boka hole amar ki korar thakte pare?
Shawon: plz bolun apni ashole ke
Shabbir: Bollam to ami vut,ekti otripto atta je eikhane goto 25 bochor dhore ghure beracche ekjon er kach theke protishodh newar jonne.
Shawon: kiser protishodh? kar kach theke?
Shabbir: eto proshno koro keno? ami bolechina je somoy ashle sob jante parbe.
Shawon: ta to bujhlam.kintu apni hotat amar shamne dekha dilen keno ar jolsha ghore amar chobi e ba ashlo kivabe?
Shabbir: Tomar shamne dekha dewar ekta karon ache,tomar chobi tar o ekta karon ache,karon chara ki kono kichu hoi naki ei duniya te?
Shawon: apni eto rohosh-sho kore kotha bolchen ami to kichui bujhte parchina.
Shabbir:Beshi bujhar dorkar nai akhon.
Shawon: amar matha elomelo hoye jacche.
Shabbir:setai to ami chai.
Shawon: kintu keno?
Shabbir: abar proshno? Ei sob kotha rakho,eibar amar kotha shono,accha bolo to ami vut hishebe kemon?
Shawon: ki?
Shabbir: ami vut hishebe kemon?
Shawon: jani na
Shabbir: rag koreche !!! ha ha ha ok cholo amra friends hoi,vut ar manush er moddhe friendship,tumi raji?
Shawon: tomar sathe friendship kore amar lav ki? tumi jodi amake fad e felo?
Shabbir: Amar friend holey tumi tomar sob proshno er utor pabe,akhon bolo friends naki dushman?
Shawon (ektu chinta kore): thik ache friends.
Shabbir: amar friend hoye thakte hole tomake ekta shorto mante hobe
Shawon: ki shorto?

Part Four:

Shawon: ki shorto?
Shabbir: aage bolo tumi shorto ta mante parba to?
Shawon: mante to hobe,na manle amar proshno er uttor pabo ki kore?
Shabbir: smart chele,ok bolchi tahole,sorto holo agami ek soptaho tumi ei sopnopurir baire jete parbena,eikhaney tomake thakte hobe. ami jani tumi eikhane biva namer ek meye ke biye korte eshecho,but agami saat din or satheo tumi dekha korte parbana,ei barir baire ber holey tomar upor bipod neme ashbe,ami jemon valo abar temon kharap,so ei shorto tomake mante hobe,na hole amar voyongkor rup ta tumi dekhte pabe...... goto 25 bochor dhore ami jevabe eker por ek manush merechi,tumio hoito tader e dolovukto hoye jabe jodi tumi amar kotha na shuno.
Shawon chintai pore gelo,ek soptaho Biva ke na dekhe o thakbe ki kore?
Shabbir: ami jani tumi ki chinta korcho,eto chintar ki ache? matro to saat din,dekhte dekhte kete jabe...
Shawon 9onek koshte): thik acche
Shabbir: valo,eibar tomar chokh bondo koro
Shawon chokh bondo korlo.Shabbir chokh khulte bollo ar o chokh khule dekhlo je ora barir vitor theke akhon baire bagan e daariye ache.
Shawon: eta korle kivabe?
Shabbir: ei..... tumi na apni bolo,karon ami tomar boro..... beche thakle akhon amar boyosh 50 hoto,bujhcho? ami 25 bochor thaktey mara giyechilam taw 25 bochor aage,tai ei 25 bochor boyoshey atke achi akhono......ami jani tomar boyosh 30,tai amake tomar choto choto mone hoi tai na?
Shawon: Apni eto kichu bujhlen kivabe?
Shabbir (hashi diye): ami vut na !!! ami bujhbona to ke bujhbe? akash er dik e takaw,ki dekhte paccho?
Shawon: Purnimar chand.
Shabbir: tumi ki jano je vut ra shudhu omabosh-shar raatey ber hoy,kintu ajke purnimar raat e ami ber holam,tomar obak lageni?
Shawon: hmm,tai to! ber holen keno?
Shabbir: ajke amar mon valo,onek din por ajke ekta shikar pelam,shikar na thik,shikar korar mohora pelam jeta diye amar onek diner opurno shikar korte parbo ar amar protishodh o purno korte parbo......25 bochor er opekkha,kom kotha noy,ami ei 25 bochor dhore koto kosto peyechi,koto ghurechi ei barir char deyal e sey shikar er ashai,kintu paini,obosheshe 25 bochor por se amar kache dekha dilo,ei bar khela jombe valo
Shawon: apni ki bolchen ? amar mathai to kichui dukchena
Shabbir: dukbe dukbe shob e dukbe,somoy ashuk.... matro to saat ta din tai na?
Shawon: accha ei saat ta din je ami thakbo,eikhane ami korbo ta ki?
Shabbir: eikhane tumi shob pabe,tomar ja korte iccha hobe,ba ja mone ashbe,seta tumi tomar shamne peye jabe automatically,jemon dhoro tomar jodi kalke shokal e ghum theke uthe Bivar kotha mone pore tahole Biva hajir hoye jabe tomar shamne.......Sotti Biva na,or proti-chaya ashbe,kintu tomar kache mone hobe je sotti sotti o chole ashche.....ei rokom vabe tumi ja chaw,tai hobe,so no chinta,just do foorti,ami chai ei saat ta din tumi aram kore thako,karon shesh er din ta tomar jonno ektu vari hobe......

Shawon shune khushi holo,vablo bah besh mojar to vut er sathe friendsship korar kichu sufol pawa jabe,kintu shesher din vari hobe eita bujhte parlona.

Shabbir: amar kotha shunte kharap lagche? kharap lagleo amar kichu korar ney,karon amar kotha tumi shunte baddho
Shawon: baddho keno?
Shabbir: shorto vule geso?
Shawon: oh accha
Shabbir: ami kintu ek ek somoy ek ek ta rup dharon korte pari,jekono kichu,table chair theke shuru kore manush,poshu pakhi,je kono kichur rup e chole jete pari,ei je akhon dekho ami ki rup dharon kori

Shawon cheye thaklo,ekta alor jholkani holo ar o dekhlo o shamne Biva dariye ache.

Shawon: Biva tumi?
Shabbir (Bivar rup e): gadha eita Biva na,ami Shabbir,tomar vut friend,daraw ami abar change hocchi,na hole tumi ei Bivar rup e amake dekhe abar prem kora shuru kore dibe.

Shabbir abar sho-rup e fi re elo.

Shawon: apni eigulo paren ki kore? (bimugdho hoye)
Shabbir: ami shob pari,ami vut na ! ami to tomar bepar eo shob jani.
Shawon: ki janen?
Shawon: ei je tomar pura nam Shahriar Shawon,ma babar ekmatro chele,boyosh 30,ma baba desh er baire thake,software firm e kaj korcho dhakar gulshan e,ar akhon biye korte eshecho.Tomar jonmodin 19 April,uch-chota 5 feet 8 inch, tumi chocolate milk khete khub pochondo koro,ar gonit tomar prio subject. Thik bollam?
Shawon (obak hoye): ekdom thik......kintu.....
Shabbir: No kintu,bolechi a amar spiritual power ache,ami shob jani,sutorang eto obak howar kichu ney.
accha bolo to amake dekhle ki tomar voy lage?
Shawon: majhe majhe
Shabbir (hashi diye): ki bolo? friends holam,taw voi lage? keno voi lage? karon kono pa ney,ami ure ure berai,shob somoy kalo jama pori ar minute minute e udhaw hoye jai?
Shawon: hmm accha apni kalo jama poren keno shobosomoy?
Shabbir: amar mon e onek kosto,tai kalo jama pori. Tumi ki jano ekjon mansuh more jawar por kokhon pret-atta ba vut hoye ghure fi re?
Shawon: na
Shabbir: keno? tumi vut e bishwas koro na?
Shawon: na
Shabbir: very bad,vut kintu ache...... charpashe .shob somoy ei jemon ami (hashi diye) ja bolchilam ekjon manush jodi onek kosto niye mara jai ba jodi tar opomrittu hoi tokhon more jabar por se pret-atta hoye jai,jemon ami hoyechi........je kaj ami jiboto thakte korte parini,seta ami akhon korbo 25 bochor por,amar atta onek otripto,eibar somoy eshshe shob tripti mitabar......
Shawon: kiser kosto apnar?
Shabbir: bolbo shob bolbo tomake,aste aste,tomar moner shob proshno er uttor ami debo karon tumi amar kache onek important
Shawon: ami important kivabe?
Shabbir: tomake akhon shob bolbona,tobe etotukui bolbo je ami je bolchilam je ajke ami onek khushi karon ami shikar korar mohra peye gechi,amar sey mohra hole tumi,tumi e paro amar oshomapto protishodh ke purno korte ar amar atta ke otriptir haat theke bachate......

Shawon ektu songshoye pore gelo,or moddhey ekta vinno protikriya kaj korchilo,ek dik e janar iccha,onno dik e ektu sondeho,shob miliye jogakhichuri.

Shabbir:eto chinta korte hobena. cholo eibar khete jai,tomar khuda lageni?Vitore cholo onek khabar ache.
Shawon: accha
Shawon uthe hata dibe dibe amon somoy:
Shabbir: ami thakte hatbe keno? Chokh bondho koro ar amra vitore chole jabo

Chokh er ek polok e bagan theke sopnopurir vitore.Shawon dekhlo sey jolsha ghor ta ke jekhaner deyal e or ekta painting kora purano chobi ache.Jolsha ghorer majh khane bishal dinning table ar tarp upor onek gulo khabar er dish sajano,tok,jhal,mishti,shob e chilo.Shawon to eto gulo khabar dekhe lov shamlate parlo na.

Shabbir: khete icche korche? boshe poro ar shono tomar chobi tar dik e bar bar takabena,ar chobir bepare proshno korbena,ami shob proshno er uttor debo shesher din e,akhon khete bosho.

Shawon boshe porlo khete,bishal table er ek prante Shawon boshe boshe kacchi biriyani khacche ar onno prante Shabbir ek asto mora murgir shob palak chi le fele diye thik murgi tar golar upor kamor boshalo,Shabbir er mukh er du pash theke goriye porte thaklo mora murgir lal rokto.Shawon dekhe or bomi chole ashlo.

Shabbir: bomi ashar kichu ney,tumi tomar khawa khaw,ar ami amar khaw khai,agami saat din tomake eigulo sojjo korte hobe,prothom prothom kharap lagbe,kintu dekhe nio shob thik hoye jabe. (chokh baka kore) purnimar raat e mora murgi khete je ki moja,seta tumi ki bujhbe? ei je rokto,eitar taste e alada,onek moja...........onek.................

Part Five:

Dekhte dekhte kete gelo choy ti din,Shabbir Shawon er kach theke saat din er somoy niyechilo sekhan theke choy din otibahito hoye gelo.Shawon ar Shabbir er moddhe valo undestanding hoye gelo.Tarpor elo shesh din,soptom din ti,je din e Shabbir wada korechilo je o Shawon ke shob kichu khule bolbe.Chole elo sey din ti,16 December.

!6 December er shokal e Shabbir eka eka kotha bolchilo jolsha ghore,Shawon tokhono ghumacchilo.

Shabbir ( chokh baka kore,mukh e rag er ovibakti niye,jor golay): Ah ajkey sedin !! Je din tir jonno ami goto 25 ti bochor til til kore opekkha korechi sey din obosheshe choley elo. Shawon tumi khub e boka ,ki sohoje amake bishwas korle !! tumi to jano na je tomar sathe ami bondhutto korechi jate tumi amar upor sondeho na korte paro,ar amio tomar close hoye tomar pithe pchon theke kop boshate pari. Tumi e to amar shikar ei choy din eo tumi bujhte paro ni, afsos !!! (hashi diye) issh.......... Shawon..... tomar somoy eibar khotom,jodio tomar kono dosh ney tobu o tomake morte hobe na hole amar protishodh puron hobe ki kore? Kan tanley matha ashe,ar tumi e hole sey kan jake ami amon tan dibo je matha chute ashte baddho !!! HA HA HA !!!

Shabbir Shawon ke ghum theke deke tullo.

Shabbir: shuvo shokal,ghum kemon holo?
Shawon ( chokh muchte muchte) : eito valo,shokal hoye geche?
Shabbir: hmm. ajke tomar amar sathe shesh din mone ache? ajke ami bolechilam tomake shob khule bolbo,mone ache?
Shawon: ha mone ache. akhon e bolben? aage fresh hoye nasta kore ney?
Shabbir (rag er ovibakti niye): NA !! akhoni shob kichur foisala hoye jak,setai valo

Shabbir er rag makha mukh dekhe Shawon kichuta vito hoye porlo.

Shawon: ki hoyeche? rag korchen keno?
Shabbir: Keno rag korchi??? bolchi tar aage chokh bondo koro

Shawon chokh bondho kore khultey dekhlo o bagan e dariye,kintu sshokal e poriborte sekhane ghono kalo ondhokar.Sey ondhokar er vitore ek chota alo,sey alo ektu ektu kore or dik e egiye ashte thaklo,obosheshe sey alo theke ekjon e chaya ber hoye ashlo ar sey chaya mukhomukhi daralo Shawon er shamne.Ei chaya ta ke Shawon aage kokhono dekheni,khub bivotso ekdom vutmarka chaya,dekhey Shawon aro voy peye gelo.Shawon Shabbir er kotha chinta korte laglo je o kothay gelo o ke bagan e niye eshe?Chaya ta vuter awaj e kotha bolte shuru korlo.

Chaya: ki re? Shabbir ke khujchish? Gadha amake chinte parli na?? ami sey jar sathe goto choy ta din chili, ami sey ja ke tui tor vut friend hishebe accept korechili,Ami e SHABBIR !!
Shawon 9kichu bujhe uth-te na pere) : ki? hotey parena,Shabbir to onek valo ami ta ke chini
Shabbir: Na tui chinish na,ami e Shabbir,etai amar ashol rup......... dekhe ne valo kore !!!
Shawon: amake tui kore bolchen keno?
Shabbir: karon tui etar e joggo
Shawon: ki korechi ami?
Shabbir: ki korish nai seta bol !!! akhon somoy esheche to ke shob kichu bolar... tor jana dorkar amar protishodh ta ki,ar ei jonno amar past er kahini to ke shunte hobe.Aaj theke 25 bochor aage kon sal chilo bol to?
Shawon (kapa golay): 1971
Shabbir: thik bolechish.... 1971 chilo.Amar baba chilo ei Mirjapur er jomidar,ei sopnopurir malik.Ami chilam tar ekmatro chele,tokhon amar boyosh chilo 25,amar biye o thik hoyechilo ei gram er e ek meyer sathe,nam chilo tar Biva.Amader ei sopnopurite shob chilo tokhon,jomidari,dhon-doulot,shob.Baba-Syed Mazhar,Ma- Begum Rokeya,Amar boro bhaiya- Masud,Ami ar amar choto bon-Sara-ei chilo amader poribar,khub valoi chilam amra.Kichu din er vitor amar biye taw hoye jabe amon obostha,Biva ke ami khub valobastam.koto sopno chilo amar........kintu shob shesh hoye giyechilo sey ek raatey

Desh e tokhon cholchilo muktir lorai,muktijuddho cholchilo.Ei mirjapur eo chole eshechilo pakistani military ra ar tader ke sahajjo korechilo amader gram er kichu rajakar ra.Gram er sobai pranpon mile juddho korchilo shanti bahinir biruddhe.kintu amra pere uth-te parchilam na oder sathe,ora ek ek kore ordhek gram ke sabar kore fello.Akdin shunlam je ora amar Biva ke mere feleche gono dhorshon korar por........ ami kichui korte parini,ami bakruddho hoye jai.Shudhu Biva na ,ami amar puro Poribar ke hariyechi sedin.

Sedin raat e amra ghumiye chilam sobai,hotat shuni golagulir shobdo,ora hamla chaliye chilo ,shob paradar der ke guli kore mere fele ora sopno purir vitor e dhuke porlo.Amra tokhon sobai nijer pran bachanor jonno lukanor chesta korlam.Baba loray korlen oder sathe jomidar der bonduk diye,kintu shesh mesh paren ni,baba guli biddho hon,babar chitkar shune amra sobai jar jar lukanor jaiga theke ber hoye dekhi baba toto khon e ar beche ney,ma to haw maw kore kede uthlo,ora amake ar bhaiya ke bedhe fello.ar ma ke sathe sathe amader chokher shamne guli kore mere fello.Baki thaklo bhaiya ami ar choto bon. bhaiya chilo amar pashe ,bhaiyar mukher vitor rifle dukhiye guli kore fello ora,bhaiya mukh diye ghor ghor kore rokto chite ashlo amar gaye. ora keno jani amake bachiye rekhechilo shob kichu dekhanor jonno,amar to chinta hocchilo je choto bon ke ora ki korbe.Sara ke char jon ghire fello,tarpor shuru holo sarar gogon bidari artochitkar.......Ora amar e chokh er shamne amar e choto bon ta ke shesh kore dilo.Tarpor ora amakeo guli kore mere fele chole gelo. pach ti lash nithor vabe nistej vabe pore thaklo sopnopuri te,sedin ei mrittu hoyechilo sopnpopurir,mrittu hoyechilo amar aponjon der.

Ami aaj o vuli ni sedin er kotha,goto 25 ti bochor dhore ei sriti ami boye beracchi, amar akhono mone ache babar sey shohidi mrittu,bhaiya mukh theke ber howa lal taja rokto.Amar kan e akhono dhorshito howar somoy Sarar sei chitkar baje,bechari ke ora onek kosto diye mereche amar chokh er shamne,ami oder ekta keo vuli ni,vuli ni sey rajakar der chehara jara amader barir sobai ke mere felechilo,amar bon ke dhorshon korechilo....... char jon chilo ora,sobar chehara amar mone ache,baba,ma,bhaiya,sara oder ke mere felar por oder mukher sey shoitani hashi ami aaj o vuli ni....... tai to mrittur por ami protishodh e nemechi je jara amar bon ke kosto diyeche,amar poribar ke hotta koreche tader ke shesh kore debo.char jon rajakar der moddhey ami tin jon ke mere felechi,baki ache ekjon,ei ekjon ke na mara porjonto ami shanto hobo na...........

Jey tin ta rajakar sedin jara eshechilo amader bashai tara to shadhinotar por amon valo vab nilo je tara jeno kichui jane na,onek taka poishar malik o hoyechilo,kintu amar protishodh theke bachte pareni kew.Kintu ekjon ke ami akhono marte pari ni,kintu akhon marte parbo tor maddhom e.
Shawon (hotovombo hoye): amae maddhome ? ke sey ekjon???

Last Part

Shabbir: jolsha ghore je shob chobi dekhechili tui segulo holo shob rajakar der chobi jaderke ami goto 25 bochore merechi. ekta chobi kalo kapore e dhaka chilo jeta ke ami marte parini,ajke akhon ami ta ke marbo.
Shawon: kintu chobi ta to amar chilo,ar ami to rajakar na
Shabbir: tor chehara ki shudhu tor ekar?? tor cheharar sathe aro ekjoner cheharar mil ache janish na??
Shawon: babar chehara ar amar chehara to ek rokom. tar mane apni eto din baba ke khujchilen? amar baba ki rajakar chilo? ami to jani na
Shabbir: tui janbi kemne? tor to boyosh tokhon 5 bochor chilo, ha tor baba Nasimuddin rajakar,ar tui ekta rajakar ekta dhorshok er chele.Ar ei jonne to ke akhon morte hobe.
Shawon: kintu ami to kichu korini,amar to kono dosh nai
Shabbir: 25 bochor aage amar 13 bochorer choto bon tar ki dosh chilo je o ke dhorshon kore mere fela holo?? ar tor bap e ei shob er mul hota. tui shoitan er chele
Shawon (jor golay): amar baba niye kichu bolben na
Shabbir uh,tej koto? rajakar er chele abar uchu golay kotha bola taw abar amar shamne,bodmaish er baccha,dekh moja

Shabbir chokh er ishara korlo ar puro sopnpopuri ek kalo acchadon e dheke gelo,o or haat gulo lomba kore Shawon er golay pechiye diye tan dilo,Shawon khok khok korte laglo ar shob or shamne porishkar hoye gelo je Shabbir goto saat din dhore o ke ki bolte cheyechilo.

Shabbir: tui jedin eikhane prothom eshechili ami tor chehar dekhe bujhte perechilam je tui ke, ei rokom shoitan marka chehara rajakar ar oi kuttader bongshodhor der e thakte pare. Tui jedin amar eikhane thaka shuru korli ek soptaher nam niye, sedin thekey ami to ke marar bondobosto korchi,ar tui ter o pash nai,gadhar baccha kotha kar !!! prothom din theke ei sopnpopuri te joto belar khabar tui kheyechish,shob khabar ei ami slow poison mishiyechi,ar ei khabar gulo 25 bochor er purano,goto 25 bochor dhorey ami protidin khabar gulo te ek fota ek fota kore bish mishiyechi karon ami jantam ek din na ekdin toke eikhane ashtey hobe. ar obosheshe tui eshechish,akhon to ke mortey hobe.already tor shorir er ordhek to ami bish diye okejo kore diyechi,eibar amar,ei vut er karishma dekh.
Shawon: kintu Biva........
Shabbir: HA HA HA HA, oh accha to ke to bolai hoi nai, Biva bole kew nai, Biva ashol e ami e chilam,meye hoye na sajle to ke to ami eikhane tante partam na,din er bela Biva ar raat er bela Shabbir hoye ami tor sathey chilam,tor sathe friendship korechi,jate tui amar upor sondeho na korte parish,ar freindship kore close hoye kache eshe marar mojay alada,tor babar trick use korlam jeta se 25 bochor aage amar babar sathe korechilo ar dhoka diye amader ke mere felechilo.Bujhchish akhon hadharam er baccha !!!

Shawon shob kotha shune sthobir hoye porlo,o rajakar er chele o eita mene nite pareni.

Shabbir: ami jani tor kosto hocche shob kichu shune,kintu amar kichu korar nai,to ke mortey hobe,tui na morle tor baba to eikhane ashbena,tui morle tor baba eikhane ashbe ar ami ta keo khotom kore dibo,ar amar oshomapto protishodh ami shomapto korte parbo.Ashol e tor moto shob rajakar der baccha der ke mere fela uchit,karon toder bap dada der dushito deshdrohi rokto toder dehe o boiche,amar ekar pokkhe joto gula rajakar ar oder baccha chilo ami merechi,kintu aro to ache eirokom,oder keo shesh kore dite hobe,hoito amar moto kono otripto arek ta atta ami chole jawar por ei kaj ta korbe.
Shawon: plz amake marben na,plz............ (kado kado konthe)
Shabbir: Shonamoni,tomake marbo na? tahole ki korbo tomake niye?? to ke kuttar moto pitano uchit,bodmaish kotha bolish kon shahosh e?
Shawon: ami sotti eishob jantam na,amake plz marben na.......
Shabbir: amar korar kichu ney,to ke mortey hobe ar akhoni tui morbi.

Ei bole Shabbir Shawon er ghar motke dilo ar o ke chere dile or nithor shorir mati te lutiye pore.Shabbir or attik sokti diye onno rup dharon kore Shawon er babar kache khobor pouche dilo je Shawon ar beche ney.11 ghontar moddhey Nasimuddin hajir holo sopnopurite.Nasimuddin dhukar por sopnopurir fotok thas kore bondho hoye jai,ar vitore Nasimuddin chara ar kew dhukte pareni,Baritir upor sey kalo acchadon tokhon o chilo.Shabbir chole elo Nasimuddin er shamne.Tarpor kono kotha bolar sujok na diye Shabbir Nasimuddin er ghar motke dilo,Shabbir dariye dekhlo duijoner morodeho,Or chokh diye girye porlo pani,eto din er je kosto bu ke chilo,je jontrona chilo seta theke oboshesh aaj o pelo mukti.Akhon or jawar pala.Sopnopurir upor theke kalo bishad er chayar acchadon ta shore gelo,Shabbir ondhokar e (tokhon raat hoye giyechilo) ber hoye elo sopnopuri theke,O aste aste akash e uthe gelo,megher moddhe hariye jabar aage o shesh bar er moto takiye dekhlo or basha sopnopuri ke.Tarpor o ondhokar megh gulor moddhe hariye gelo. (shomapto)

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i really don't understand the real meaning of this story ....

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long but interesting ! thanks for sharing ...



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nice to see the bengali story in roman font ...

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Pooja wrote:
nice to see the bengali story in roman font ...



i think now you got the meaning of this story

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3 much fantasy..... Ha ha ha



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Eisob rajakarder jodi evabe mara jeto tahole deshe bodhoy ar somossha thakto na.Tobe rajakarer sontan nishpap hole tar shashti pawa uchit na.Sudhu tader kuje ber kora uchit jara desh matrika ke opoman koreche.Most interesting part was the first two parts of this story.Arektu short hole valo hoto.onakankhito extension golper gamvirjo nosto kore.overall nice story.

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